All of the Bloody Mary movies I watched wasn't scary and poorly written. I want to watch something scary with intense and I feel like the best way is to pitch an Idea that is scary and that would work.
It would start with a pale and plain woman kissing the man of her dreams saying she can't wait for the big day tomorrow. She is pale with dark brown hair with pale lips. He has deep eyes you can get lost in. The setting is old time in a small village. He smiles but the audience can see his smile is fake but she can't. All she see is the man of her dreams that she always wanted and she is finally getting him. She wants to consummate their love tonight but he is hesitant. He tells her that they shouldn't anymore till the big night to make it special. He walks out and her good friend with blonde curly hair and blue eyes walks in and helps her get ready for the big night.
She walks down the isle to find no one waiting at the other end of the alter. She was jilted, heartbroken and humiliated. She later finds him in a cottage with her friend. They laugh in her face and say that they have been seeing each other behind her back, he doesn't love her and she is not pretty enough. They are going to leave the community together and be happy without her.
That night is raining with strong lightning. Mary later confronts her friend about her betrayal in the farm. Her friend says "dear sweet mary, you're not pretty enough to be with him" and she spills pigs blood on Mary. Mary breaks a mirror and decapitates her friend with the mirror and she screams in horror. Her ex fiance walks in and she tells him there is nothing standing in our way anymore. we can be together forever. He tells her that he doesn't want to be with her in a loud angry voice. She states that she is pregnant with his child. He rebuffs her stating that he doesn't want a child with her and stabs her in the stomach and neck with the piece of glass that killed Mary's friend. He said he rather die than to have a kid with her. She decapitates him before falling and dying herself. The last scene is her holding his hand and her belly.
The screen fades away to a group of young teenagers listening to a blonde girl telling the legend of bloody Mary. She tells the girls how the game work and they have to say her name three times in a mirror for her to show up. She writes down her name on red paint three times on red paint as she tells the story. She dares the shy and quiet girl of the group to play the game in the bathroom as she holds a candle. She reluctantly agrees. The girls all walk to door following the shy girl. The blonde girl is behind the shy girl as the other girls about to enter but she blocks them from entering because she wants the shy girl to do it alone in the bathroom. She lights the candle for her and reminds her how to play the game and then she exits the bathroom and turn off the lights. She is hesitant to say her name but the blonde girl taunts her so she does it. The blonde girl holds the door shut to try to scare her. Nothing happens for a minute but then a big lightning strikes and you see big flashes of light. The mirror starts to leak blood and the mirror starts flashing light and reveals a pale white woman wearing white. Another flash comes and it reveals her covered in blood with glowing eyes and she jumps towards the mirror and disappears. The walls starts to drip blood and you can hear screams. Mary appears next to the blond girl and cuts off her hands as they are still holding the door. The other girls starts screaming and try to escape through doors and windows and everything is sealed shut and locked. One girl thought she could go through the window that Mary left open on purpose but the window closed on her and sliced her in half. Sharp objects starts flying everywhere at the girls. Shy girl is trying to get out of the bathroom wondering what is happening and screaming to be let out. All of the girls are down except for blonde girl and shy girl. Mary pokes out blonde girl's eyes and throw them to the ground as she falls to the ground dying. Shy girl could hear nothing but silence and see nothing but dark. She gazes in the mirror and sees nothing. The doors starts to open and she sees the girls lying as she looks out of the bathroom. She thinks she is safe until Mary pops out of the mirror and pulls her in and her screams starts to fade. The song baby blue by george strait starts to play and the title "bloody mary" dripping blood shows.
It fades away to a high school bell ringing as the students are heading to an assembly. The students starts talking about the murders of the girls. One person mentions Bloody Mary written on a piece of paper in red. A girl holding a good looking guys hand states that she can't believe that he still believes in fairy tales. It is just a myth and she looks back at her friend who looks just like Mary and asks her to confirm that Bloody Mary is just a myth. She agree its a myth. The guy her friend is dating used to be her ex. They walk into the theater room for the assembly that still had a mirror on the stage from a prop. They had the assembly to talk about the murders of the kids and to console everyone. A class clown type kid said that Mary did it. The girl with the boyfriend mocks him and tells him to stop. A jock boy tells the class clown to sit down and stop with the lies. He dares him to say her name in the mirror if he doesn't believe it. The teacher tries to stop it but they are interrupted. The jock says that he will do it to prove that he is an idiot. They both walk up to the stage as the Jock guy says her name in front of the whole school. Nothing happens. The girl starts to brag how she is right until she sees two hands go through the jock's and class clown's stomach holding their guts. The lights go out and the kids scream as they leave the room. They try to leave the school but Mary locks them in taking them out one by one.
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